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Post by Bethany Joy on Sept 10, 2006 20:30:31 GMT -5
That was really great! I'm definatly looking forward to the next part
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Post by chriizzz on Sept 17, 2006 7:59:51 GMT -5
Amazing! wanna read more
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Post by *SuN*kiSseD* on Sept 17, 2006 22:37:04 GMT -5
That was great Jessica!! I can't wait for your next update!!
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Post by Haley James Scott on Sept 18, 2006 15:05:56 GMT -5
Thanks! (Here the next part!)
Chapter 4
Haley had been walking alone in the dark for a while. When she looked up she was right near Nathan’s house. She looked around, It was so Silent on his sheet. No voice or cars not even a Bride. She stood there as minute went bye. Thinking about, What she wanted to say to Nathan or even if she would go and knock on this door. But she knew she had gone this far and couldn’t back away now. Haley went up the steps and knocked on the door. It only took about two minute until the door opened Standing right there was Nathan. “Hi. You’re here.” He said and waited for Haley to walked inside the house as he shut the door. “So.. The main reason I’m here well basically I wasn’t going to come here at all. I was talking to Peyton tonight I …We went out with Jake and his Friend Derek.” Haley said but then was cut off by Nathan. “So you came here to tell me your seeing someone. Nice Haley really nice.” He said walking to the Chair. “Wait! A minute. I didn’t say nothing about going with someone else. You know what I don’t even know why I came over. I’m here trying to tell you something but no. I tell you one Detail and you hit the roof. Think what you want to think, You well anyways.” Haley said walking towards the door but got held back when Nathan Grabbed her arm lightly. “Wait. Sorry Haley. You know I’m just so sick of fighting.. I want to be with you. I was to listen to what your saying on just please stay.” Nathan said looking into her eye’s. He couldn’t go now. She really did want to tell Nathan was she wanted to say. “So. Anyways. I was going alone this date or you know what it wasn’t even a date I didn’t want to be there. So. I was talking to him. But I notice something was wrong.” Haley said walking right next to Nathan now. “He wasn‘t you. Who would have though Haley James. Wanting Nathan Scott. You changed me Nathan. I don’t know when or how but you did. I don’t want anyone that Peyton or Jake set up I want you. I‘m not saying what tonight was ok. Because it isn‘t. I’m still very angry at what Brooke did. I just thought you should know this.” Haley said looking around the house and how empty it looked with Neither Dan nor Deb were there. .
“Haley.” Nathan said and lightly hugged her. He knew She was still mad at what happened earlier. But letting him hug her meant that she was getting a little less angry. “Haley I don’t know what to say. I love that you think I’ve changed you. But the truth is you changed me. I’m not the Guy that did everything for my Dad and what he wants. I realized being around you that I should really do what makes me happy and not what makes my Dad happy.” Nathan said. He looked at Haley, Getting a little Closer. Haley went a little Closer as well and was really Surprised when Nathan kissed her right there. She felt his hands on the back of her neck. He pulled away. “I told you Haley. I’m different now. Trust me ..I know it wont come easy but you’ll see. I really like you.” Nathan said kissing her again. Haley felt as though she had really seen Nathan. Not the Basket ball player or even the Rude and incentive Jerk but the Guy, that on the first Tutor session gave her a Bracelet from a Cracker jacks box. The kissed ended and Haley looked at him. “I do trust you. It’s weird I know I probably shouldn’t maybe this is some of Trick but I truly believe you. But it is getting really late. I told my mom I wouldn’t go out tonight and I did. So.. Can you take me home.” Haley asked smiling. Nathan got his Jacket and car keys. “Sure lets go.” As they both left outside the house and into the car.
Meanwhile. At the Club. Peyton and Jake were still there. Jake was about to go on stage any minute. Peyton had wonder if Haley got home alright. So when Jake went up on Stage getting ready for his act. Peyton opened her phone, She had gotten a text Message from Tutor Girl. Peyton opened it and read it. It seems the short story was Haley and Nathan were back together. Peyton Smiled texting Haley back really Quick. “Congrats” She sent and Closed her Cell phone turning it off. She looked on Stage, Seeing Jake up there. Derek was also up there playing backup Base. Peyton heard her name being Called. She looked over to see a Sober Brooke. “P.Sawyer.” Brooke said walking inside with Lucas. “You mom told me you were here.” Brooke said looking up to see Jake on Stage. “ooh. Looks like someone came here with her boyfriend.” Brooke laughed… “Brooke” Lucas said still feeling really weird seeing Peyton with someone else. But he didn’t really care anymore it was 2 months ago were Lucas and Peyton Decided to make a oath that nothing between them ever would happen not that Lucas wanted something. He was with Brooke and happy about that. “So I was here with Haley earlier. You know what you did Earlier.” Peyton asked Brooke looking at her as Lucas and Brooke sat in the seat next to Peyton’s. “What is she saying. I didn’t do anything” Brooke said really not remember about earlier. She had so many Drinks she could have done anything and she wouldn’t have remembered. She didn’t even remember Lucas getting her and taken her home. “Yea. You do Brooke.” Lucas said setting into the conversation. “Remember, Haley the Note and then Haley leaving.” Lucas asked looking at her. Brooke looked at Lucas then at Peyton. “No. I didn’t. I mean I couldn’t have did I.” She asked again then seeing both Her best friend and boyfriend face. “So how mad is she.” Brooke asked. She didn’t know Haley really well but she did know she didn’t want to make her mad just because she has a few drinks.
“Well.” Peyton said but then heard Jake voice. “After the set” Peyton said looking right at Jake singing. She felt as though she was the only person inside the Club. Then Jake started to say something but with all the Noise in there she couldn’t really hear anything. “This goes out to Peyton Sawyer.” Jake said and Started on the Guitar. Peyton heard the last part. She couldn’t believe he Dedicated a song to her and her alone.
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Post by *SuN*kiSseD* on Sept 18, 2006 21:20:27 GMT -5
That was really cute Jessica! I loved it! I can't wait for your next update!!
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Post by Peyton Sawyer on Sept 19, 2006 0:34:48 GMT -5
Love the part, really good!!
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Post by Haley James Scott on Sept 19, 2006 4:48:48 GMT -5
Thanks! (Next update soon. I have a lot of School work. So it might take a couple days)
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Post by *SuN*kiSseD* on Sept 20, 2006 22:35:09 GMT -5
Oh okay. I can't wait!
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Post by chriizzz on Sept 24, 2006 8:19:54 GMT -5
Amazing!
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Post by Haley James Scott on Sept 28, 2006 16:23:41 GMT -5
Thanks! Here a Small Chapter.. ;D
Chapter 5
Haley and Nathan where inside the car, Nathan Driving. Haley look outside it had Started to Rain a lot by time they had gotten on the main road. “You can see outside right.” Haley asked looking at Nathan. He looked out into the windshield as Haley was talking. “Yes. I’ve been in worst weather then this before.” Nathan said looking at her. But looking at the weather again he wasn’t that sure. He didn’t want to worry Haley, He heard from Lucas that she was in a car accident before from a Storm with Lucas Driving and Nathan wasn’t the Slowest Driver. Looking at Haley and Trying to get through the Weather Nathan didn’t see a big Tree Branch had fell. “Nathan!. Watch out!!” Haley said but it was too late. Nathan Slammed on his Breaks then hit the Tree Branch Smacking the car Side ways. As soon as that happened, Nathan hit his head on the Steering wheel as Haley hit hears on the Dashboard. Both Fainting from compact.
Mean while at the Club. Jake was off the Stage. Taken a break before his next seat. He walked over to Peyton. “So. Ok. I’m no Bryan Adams but I don’t think I’m that bad.” He said laughing and seeing Lucas and Brooke. “Hey. You too.” He said and looked at Peyton when she started to talk. “No. Your not Bryan Adams. Your better. Coming from mean that means about. You know me and my Music.” Peyton said smiling. She hugged Jake. “Ok. I hate to do this I really do. But my Dad going to kill me If I’m late for Curfew once again.” Peyton said looking at him. Jake put his Guitar down. “Ok. I have another set. Um.. I can walk you home if you want. I’m sure the Guys wont mind me being late.” Jake offered. “No!.” Peyton said and hugged him and kissed the side of his face. “Go and sing. Brooke and Lucas can take me home. I’ll see you tomorrow in School.” She said and left where Jake and herself were talking. “Come on P.Sawyer.” Brooke said getting her jacket back on when Peyton did. “Bye Jake.” Peyton said without talking. She walked outside seeing it Raining really bad. Peyton, Brooke and Lucas ran to the Car. “Ok. That’s the last time I get my Hair down and for what, To get it ruined by the d**n weather.” Brooke said getting into the front seat next to Lucas. “Ok. Still Best friend of mine. Tell me is Haley really pissed or what.” She asked looking at Peyton. “Well. When she felt the Club she was upset. Not really mad. I think if you just leave it for a couple days. Everything well blow over. I’m sure Nathan and Haley well talk this out.” Peyton said looking at Brooke. Brooke Turned around in the seat. “Ok. If you say so. Lucas watch out. I don’t feel like going to the hospital tonight.” Brooke said.
Fifteen minutes later, Nathan and Haley. Where still inside the car. Nathan opened his eyes. Blood down the side of his face. He looked over to see Haley, Her face was more Bruised and Bloodily then his was. He took off his sweat shirt and Cover her with it. “It’s going to be ok Hales.” Nathan said to her. He was really worried that She hadn’t woken up yet. Nathan got on his Cell phone and then heard something. He looked back at Haley. “What happened. Ouch!” She said feeling her arm.” Nathan went from a sad look to a happy one. “Hey. thank god your ok. We need to get you to the hospital.” Nathan said grabbing his cell again. “No. Don’t.” Haley said pleading with him.
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Post by *SuN*kiSseD* on Sept 28, 2006 18:26:59 GMT -5
Ah that was really good!!!! I read the first part and I was like NO! Lol, I can't wait for the next chapter!! I want to know what happens so bad!!
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Post by Haley James Scott on Sept 30, 2006 18:21:46 GMT -5
Thanks!
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Post by *SuN*kiSseD* on Sept 30, 2006 19:27:17 GMT -5
No problem, you are an amazing writer Jessica!
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Post by Haley James Scott on Oct 17, 2006 16:22:24 GMT -5
Thanks! Update!
Chapter 6
Nathan looked at Haley, What are you doing, Hales you need to go to the hospital. Nathan said looking at her, She was really hurt and for the life of Nathan. He really couldn’t figure it out. “Ok.” He said putting down the phone. He looked over at Haley again and then went outside the car. Trying his best to move the big tree branch that was keeping him from driving away with Haley back to his house. He moved it completely then walked back in the car to see Haley Sleeping. He knew from when Tim and himself took Health Class that when a person gets injured that they shouldn’t be sleeping. But Nathan wasn’t sure if Haley had hit her head or not. He Called out her name twice but he got no Response. “Haley.” Nathan said again in a panic. He didn’t care what Haley said anymore, He had to take her to the Hospital. He turned on the car and Drove. Until he reached the Hospital. Nathan Didn’t even park, he stopped at the front entrance and got outside of the car. Walking over towards the Passenger side he opened the door Picking up Haley. She still wasn’t moving or even awake. He walked inside then feeling something Blood. It was her head. He knew right then and there something was really wrong. “Help me please!… Her name is Haley James. We where inside a Car Accident. She was ok at first she talked to me. But then when I went outside the car and got back inside she wasn’t awake anymore.” Nathan said looking at the Hospital Staff taken Haley inside the other room. He watched them help her until the Double doors Closed again. He looked down and Saw all the blood on his hands. Haley Blood it was a lot, He kept thinking about what he could have done different. He knew from Lucas her parents weren‘t around since Haley was little. So Karen was her guardian Nathan ran to the bathroom Cleaning his hands really Quick then got out his Cell phone, Making the one call he Dreaded most.
Karen was inside her house. She was getting really worried. Lucas called her an hour ago and told her he was about to come home, but the weather he was going to be a couple minutes later. She hadn’t heard from Haley though. Karen had always got a phone call from Haley whenever she was out. Even if it was for only 10 minutes. Karen went into Haley room trying to find her address book when she heard the phone ring. She picked it up seeing it was Nathan Scott Cell phone. “Hello. Nathan.” Karen said. She was getting really worried when it took him about 2 min for each word he said. “Karen. I don’t want to alarm you, Haley in the hospital. We where Driving in the storm and She must have hit her head and arm. I think you should come here.” Nathan said. Karen didn’t say anything more. She walked outside the house seeing Luke Meeting her half way. “Mom, What’s wrong.”? Lucas asked stopped her in her tracks. “Haley. Something happened. Come on. She inside the hospital.” Karen said getting inside the car and Driving to the hospital. Karen and Lucas walked inside. Seeing Nathan car by the side. Karen went up to the Nurse Station. “Hi. I’m here to see Haley James. I’m her Legally guardian.” Karen said and was lead the way to Haley room, When she was already settled inside. Karen looked at Haley and then at the doctor who was Writing on her Charts. “Miss. James.” He said. Karen looked at her. “No. Miss Roe.” She said looking at the Doctor. “Sorry about that. Miss. Roe. Haley has a Broken arms and some Bruises here and there. But nothing life threaten. You can see her now. But she in a sleep right now from the medication.” The Doctor said leaving the room. Karen sat down on the Chair that was right next to Haley. Hearing the Beeps of the monitor. “Hi. Haley.” Karen said talking to her. “You know Nathan Scott out there. He saved you brought you here tonight.” Karen said looking at her Brushing her hair away from her eye’s.
Lucas looked at Nathan like he was going to say something, He then Charged at him putting him against the wall. “What the Hell was that. Are you trying to Kill Haley.” Lucas said. Nathan pushed him back. “It wasn’t my fault man, The Roads were really Slippery. You know I don’t need to Explain myself to you. I’ll Come and see Haley when she awake.” Nathan said walking away and outside. Lucas watched him go. He knew Deep down that Haley and Nathan were a couple. He didn’t know if Nathan was true to his word or not though. He really wished that he knew what Nathan’s true attention’s are. He walked in the back looking for Hales Room. When he found it he walked inside. “So how is she doing.” Lucas said grabbing a Chair and sitting next to his mom and Haley. Karen looked at Lucas. “She’s fine. Just needs some rest.” She added. Lucas smiled. “Good. Mom. Do you want anything from the Snack bar. You look like you can use some Coffee.” He added. “Sure Luke that sounds good.” She said. It was about 2 hours later. Peyton, Jake, Brooke had all come by since the rain had stopped but had to leave because Visit ting hours where over. Lucas had gone home. To get some sleep. Karen was still there Sleeping in the Chair next to Haley. She woke up heard the Door Chime open. Haley looked and Slowly opened her eye’s more to see Nathan standing in the door way. “Hi.” Haley said in a low voice… “Hey. You gave everyone including me a Scare.” Nathan said putting the Flowers down on the bed Table that was next to the front of the bed. He got a little Closer. “Sorry.” She said looking at Nathan. “Come here and sit down next to me. We never did finish our semi date.” Haley said laughing and then feeling her arm. “Guessing, I’m not going Bowling anytime soon.” She said looking at Nathan laughing.
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Post by Peyton Sawyer on Oct 17, 2006 16:31:26 GMT -5
Great part..Cant wait to read more! I loved it!
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