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Post by Peyton Sawyer on Aug 27, 2006 17:53:50 GMT -5
thanks! im on vacation now but a new part comin up when i get home
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Post by chriizzz on Aug 28, 2006 10:01:57 GMT -5
Can't wait
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Post by Haley James Scott on Aug 28, 2006 14:24:21 GMT -5
Yay!
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Post by Peyton Sawyer on Aug 28, 2006 17:10:47 GMT -5
lol, im glad you guys like it!
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Post by Bethany Joy on Aug 29, 2006 11:35:18 GMT -5
I'm sure that the next part will be just as amazing
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Post by Peyton Sawyer on Sept 13, 2006 17:16:04 GMT -5
(Ok here is the deal, i came home today and really wanted to get the next part done. I did. but im so tired now, that its not any good at all! lol, but I promise the next one will be..lol)
Chapter 5:
Peyton had fallen asleep in the car, and leaned against Jake, Jake smiled at her, it reminded him of the last time they drove of to get Jenny. He turned to right and parked the car...
“Hey, wake up…” he said and kissed her head… “We are here.”
Peyton looked up on him and smiled, “Morning…” she smiled at him.
They got out of the car, Jake came over to Peyton’s side of the car he took her and walked into his apartment. It was 2 hours until they had to go to the courtroom.
Haley woke up, to find Nathan missing next to her, “Great!” she said to herself, got dressed, and walked downstairs to find Nathan coking breakfast. A smile came up on her face as she walked over to him..
“Now, this have I missed! Im always making breakfast for me and Brooke!” she said and let out a little laugh kissing him.
“Yea, well you were sleeping, I didn’t want to wake you.” He said and smiled at her as she walked over to the table and sat down, “So what do I get?”
“You get a kiss..” he said walking over and kissed her with a sthingy in one hand..”And scrabbled eggs…I think..” he said handing her a plate with his burned food.
Lucas pulled his car over at Brookes and Haley’s apartment. He walked over to the door knocking as he let him self in..
“Brooke?” he called out looking around
Brooke was still in the bathroom fixing her hair when she heard Lucas. she looked at the clock,”Now you wanna go fast!” she looked at herself in the morrow... ”Yea!! Im in here, ill be there in one second!” she yelled out in a hurry…
30 minutes later she came out and Lucas just laughed..
”Ok, that was not one second. “
“Yea, well you need your girl to be pretty.” She smiled and kissed him, they walked out to the car driving to school.
Jake had been showing Peyton around in Savannah. They had just arrived to court, Jake was sitting with his lawyer and Peyton right behind him, when Nikki came in with her lawyer.
“Stupid Bit**!” Peyton said with a low voice as Nikki walked past her with a grin on her face like she knew she was gonna win this.
Jake looked at Nikki he started to get nervous, and fearing he would never see Jenny again.
The Judge came in and sat down. The trial was started. Nikki had everyone around her little finger..
“the court call their next vintnes, Peyton Elisabeth Sawyer!”
Peyton looked at Jake and Jake turned around meeting Peytons eyes,
“No one tould me I was gonna be up there..” she whispered to him. “I didn’t know that I swear!” Jake said confused.
Peyton took a deep breath walking up and sat down next to the judge.
As they started asking questions Peyton got really scared, she didn’t want to screw this up more for Jake.
“So, You were Jennys babysitter right?” Nikki`s lawyer asked her
“Yes.” She said short.
“DO you recall, the time you were babysitting Jenny at the mall…..”
Peyton felt her body turning cold. She culdent belive Nikki.. she was the one that made her to a vitnes.
“You lost Jenny there, or..you were busy shoping so Nikki, her mother came and took her. She tould you she was taking her own daughter to shop. And you made a big deal about it.” The lawyer added. Looking at the judge, then at Peyton.
“But still Jake forgave you and trusted you with his baby. You lost your mom when you were young. Seams to me you are trying to flirt your way into Jakes life to have a whole family. Therefore messing it all up for Nikki, spreading rumors around.,”
“objection! This has nothing to do with her, but Jake and Nikki.” Jakes lawyer said.
The judge looked at Nikki`s Lawyer.” Keep the questions relevant!”
“Look, Jake is a great father, he sacrificed everything to keep his daughter safe! Wile Nikki was getting drunk in the bars..Oh yea Nikki even had Jenny locked in her car wile she were clubbing. You should really try to turn this the right way, and think about the baby, she is grown up with Jake, She don’t even know who Nikki is!” Peyton said as Nikki`s lawyer was about to ask her something more.
The trial lasted for hours no one knew who were gonna end up with Jenny. The break was over and the judge came back inside. Jake and Nikki stood up..
“The one who is gonna have full custody Of Jenny Jagielski is Jake Jagielski. Court dismissed.”
Jake almost jumped for joy he turned around to Peyton and hugged and kissed her.. “Thank you so much, you were great up there!” he smiled at her.
“Anything for you..” she smiled. She was so happy, now she had both Jake and Jenny back in her life.
Nikki walked fast past them without looking at them, Jake just smiled..
“Guess she didn’t get what she wanted for ones.” He smiled walking over to his parents who were taking care of Jenny..
“Thanks. You guys will see your granddaughter a lot now..Im coming home..” he smiled
His mom were crying for joy, she hugged him.”Thank god, Jake..”
Peyton and Jake walked out of the courthouse with Jenny.. “come on lets go home.” Peyton said as they sat down in the car and drove of to Tree Hill.
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Post by Haley James Scott on Sept 14, 2006 9:04:56 GMT -5
Amazing!
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Post by Peyton Sawyer on Sept 14, 2006 9:07:53 GMT -5
Thanks!
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Post by chriizzz on Sept 14, 2006 9:16:09 GMT -5
That was really good
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Post by Peyton Sawyer on Sept 14, 2006 14:40:56 GMT -5
Thanks! new part coming soon
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Post by Peyton Sawyer on Sept 21, 2006 18:32:42 GMT -5
Chapter 6
Peyton woke up not seeing Jake there; the bad thoughts came running through. “Did he leave, what have Nikki done now?” She got up from bed calling for Jake but no answer; she walked downstairs and searching in all the rooms for him. He was gone. She felt her tears coming. She opened the front door seeing Jakes car was gone.
Haley woke up, looking over at Nathan. He looked so peacefully. She just smiled at him, and lied down again closing her eyes, she loved Saturdays. She could stay in with Nathan for as long as she wanted.
Lucas and Brooke were already up. Lucas had made Brooke breakfast. His mom was out of town with Keith, they were engaged, but Dan had tried to ruin for them so they decided to get away and spend some time alone. Brooke were so happy, she had Lucas with her. She had missed him so much this summer.
Peyton’s door got opened, she ran downstairs and over to the door seeing Jake and Jenny standing in the door just looking at Peyton’s scared face.. “Ok, calm down, Im not a thief or anything..” he said laughing, with Jenny on his arm giggling and a bag in his hand.. “Where were you?” Peyton asked shortly crossing her arms. “I was at the store, I left you a note. How do you survive with almost no food in the house?” he asked walking into the kitchen putting Jenny down, and started to unpack. “Oh...” Peyton said with a little laugh. “We should really find a place to have notes.” “Yea. And especially if you are gonna get that worried every time I get out of the house..Im sorry I didn’t tell you myself, I just didn’t want to wake you.” He said closing the fridge, then walking into the living room.. Peyton walked after him..”Yea speaking of leaving. I promised Haley and Brooke I would meet them. We are having a girls day on the mall. I can take Jenny with me and you can catch up with Lucas and Nathan..” she said. “yea. Sure. Sounds cool. as long as you promise me something..” Jake said moving closer to her.. “what?” she asked with a smile “that you will stop worrying, and later, and that we can have the night to our self.” He smiled and kissed her..
“Oh, yea..well I have to check first. Im a really busy girl..” she joked and kissed him back, hearing Jenny giggling behind her. “Come on girly, lets go and shop..” she smiled picking Jenny up. “don’t spoil her or anything!” Jake said seeing them heading for the door.. “Don’t worry so much.” She said with a little laugh and left the house..
“Ball! Ball!” Nathan called out as Jake passed him the ball. “Yes!” Nathan said with a grin on his face..”15! We won!” he laughed giving Lucas a high five.. ‘Jake shock his head with a little laugh and sat down at the bench at the river court. “So hows it going with you two?” He asked Lucas and Nathan. “Well, as good as expected. Dan is messing everyone around, but that’s no news. You shuld be ready you are the only one in tree hill he haven’t ruin...” Lucas said sitting down next to Jake. Nathan looked at them,”yea, im so glad he is out of my and Haley’s life now..” “You and Haley? So you’re back together again?” Lucas asked his brother who gave him a smile. “yea, We got to talk last night, and I realised that I didn’t want to waste any more time fighting, I love her you know..” Nathan said. The Guys were sitting on the bench talking for hours
“Ok, got to have this!, and This! And..No, this!” Brooke was picking clotes and shoes form all the stores.. “Ok, down girl!” Haley laughed putting things back after Brooke.. “What?! Come on Haley, I need to look good for Lucas!” “I don’t think he goes after you by your looks Brooke.” Peyton laughed holding Jennys hands, and bags of clotes and toys for Jenny in the other hand. “Who said that?” Brooke asked making an excuse for shoping more.. “Well first of all, he picked you over me, and second of all he have seen you without any make up..” Peyton joked.. “Funny..” Brooke said faking a laugh, and then smiled. “Oh Iv been looking for this forever!” Haley said with a smile. “ A Box opener? Girl you have some seriously problems!” Brooke said giving her a sympatric look. “What, me and Nathan have been meaning to get one of these but we never did..” she explained.
Peyton pulled her car over and got Jenny and the bags out of the car. Jenny ran towards the door, when Jake opened it.” dada!” she called out, as Jake picked her up.. “Its 8pm Peyton..” he laughed.. “So, we had a good time..” She said back getting inside looking through her bags. “I found Jenny the Cutest thing!” she said getting a pink dress up from the bag.. “How much money did you spend anyway?” Jake looked at her.. “Enough.” She smiled and kissed him. She was so glad she had them both back. She would never let Jake leave her again. “Ok, Lets just get Jenny ready for bed, and later we can pop in a movie,” he smiled and kissed her back before going upstairs getting Jenny to bed, while Peyton sait down waiting for Jake.
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Post by Haley James Scott on Sept 21, 2006 18:43:25 GMT -5
Loved it!
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Post by chriizzz on Sept 22, 2006 4:13:34 GMT -5
That was really good! I loved it! Update soon, I want to read more!
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Post by Peyton Sawyer on Sept 24, 2006 7:13:31 GMT -5
Thanks guys!
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Post by *SuN*kiSseD* on Sept 25, 2006 23:59:57 GMT -5
I am loving your fanfic! Amazing job on it!!
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