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Post by Peyton Sawyer on Sept 26, 2006 2:16:42 GMT -5
Thank you!!
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Post by Peyton Sawyer on Oct 3, 2006 19:21:32 GMT -5
Chapter 7:
Jake pulled over when they reached the kinder garden. Jenny was sitting in the back seat smiling. She looked so happy. He didn’t feel right about getting her into the kinder garden, but he knew it was right for Jenny. She needed to be around kids her age. He got her out of the car and putt her pink back pack on her before he walked in with her holding her hand…
”Ok here we go kiddo, hope you are ready for this.” He smiled at her, who just giggle back, dragging him inside.
“Hello, you must be Jenny.” One of the women who worked there came over.
“Hey, im Holly. Ill be talking good care of your daughter.” She said to Jake.
“Good! And if there is anything call me…Here is some numbers you can reach me.” He said getting out a list of numbers.
Holly let out a little laugh..”Don’t worry, we will take good care of her.”
“Ok.” Jake nodded with a little laugh, then sitting down facing Jenny..“you be a good girl now, and Ill come and get you in a couple of hours.” He said kissing his daughter goodbye before driving back home again.
Peyton was getting ready for school. As Jake beeped the Horne, she walked outside and sat down in the car...”How did it go?” she asked him taking her seatbelt on.
“Good...Better that I thought it would go.” He smiled driving to school. He Had a bad feeling about all this.
After school, Peyton and Jake drove to the kinder garden to pick Jenny up. Peyton walked over to Jake`s side as he got out of the car..
“you did good today, I though you were gonna pick her up way erligher.”
“Yea, well I decided to give this a chance.” He said taking Peytons hand walking inside.he spotted Holly and walked over to her..
“hey. Im here to pick Jenny up..” he said looking around.
“Yes, one second. Ill find her.she did really good for the first time.” Hlooy smiled walking over to the other kids.
“See, this was not a bad idea.” Peyton smiled at Jake seeing Holly coming back..
“Jenny got picked up one hour ago.” She said looking at the list..
Jake could feel all his fears coming back. He almost fell down on the floor.
Peyton looked at Holly..”What? by who?” she asked feeling really scared..
“Her mom came and picked her up.” Holly said seeing Both Jake and Peyton getting more and more worried. Jake and Peyton both felt like they got a slap on their faces when she said “her mother.”
“Her mother. This is her mother!” Jake said mad. He knew it was Nikki right away, this smelled Nikki all over.
“How did she look like?” Peyton asked but before Holly got the chance to answer Peyton cut in..” let me guess dark long hair, this tall, skinny?” she said.
“Yes. Im sorry, who is she? She clamed she was her mother, and by rules we cant keep her from picking her up.” Holly said putting the list down.
“So what your saying is that anyone could just come here and pick the kids up like they please?!” Jake argued
Peyton looked at him.. ”Ok come on, she cant be that far away!” she said running outside to the car with Jake.
“I cant belive this is happening again. How could Nikki just take her!?” Peyton said fearing whats gonna happen. She knew this feeling. She had gone through this two times before.
“I don’t know, ok!?” Jake snapped back..”Im sorry, Peyton. I just really need to find my daughter.” He said feeling his hate for Nikki becoming clearer and clearer.
“yea. I know so do I..But we need to keep our heads clear now.” Peyton said looking out of the window. She wanted to just break down, but she had to be strong for Jake now.
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Post by chriizzz on Oct 4, 2006 8:28:28 GMT -5
That was really really really good!!!!! I can't wait to read more  |
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Post by Peyton Sawyer on Oct 5, 2006 13:20:49 GMT -5
Thank you!  |
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Post by *SuN*kiSseD* on Oct 11, 2006 21:13:46 GMT -5
OH MY GOD!!! That was soooo good!! I wanna read more so bad now!!
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Post by Peyton Sawyer on Oct 12, 2006 18:06:31 GMT -5
aww, thank you!!! more are coming the second i have time to write more!
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Post by *SuN*kiSseD* on Oct 13, 2006 20:38:29 GMT -5
Awesome! I can't wait!
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Post by Peyton Sawyer on Oct 15, 2006 9:19:55 GMT -5
Kind of a short chapter, but ill write more soon.
Chapter 8:
“Take care of your daddy.” Peyton said holding her tears in as she looked over at the boat, then at Jake and Jenny..
“Peyton….” Jake said hating to see Peyton like this.
“Look, don’t say anything, you guys just be safe.” Peyton said, there was a silent over them when all of the sudden Peyton kissed Jake. Jake himself got surprised, but took Peyton into his arms, before he walked over to the boat. As they waved goodbye. As Jake turned over to go on board a woman came and took Jenny in her arms before waving goodbye to Peyton, then kissed Jake before the three of the walked on to the boat
“No. Jake. Don’t…NIKKII!!!” Peyton woke up of her own voice, she looked over at Jake who was stunned by Peyton..
“Are you ok? You had a bad dream..” Jake said getting his eyes on the road again, It was dark outside and raining..
“Yea, Im sorry..” Peyton said short looking outside the window. It helped her that it was only a bad dream. Peyton and Jake had a huge fight before she fell asleep about Jenny and Nikki. Both Jake and Peyton loved each other, and she knew it was stupid thinking that maybe Jake would end up with Nikki in the end.
Jake looked at Peyton then back at the road, he wish he could take their stupid fight back, but it was too late, he just wanted his daughter back.
“Sorry..” Jake said with a soft voice looking at the road.
Peyton didn’t say anything; she could feel a thin smile creeping up on her face, which disappeared fast again.
“jake! Look!” Peyton said pointing at a car..”Its Nikkis.!” She said then seeing a motel sign..
Jake parked the car in a hurry, but before he got the chance to stop the car Peyton jumped out and ran into the Motel seeing a guy sitting behind a computer
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“hey, I need to find someone, A girl with a baby…Have you seen her?” Peyton asked tapping her fingers.
“Sorry lady, I cant tell you anything. Rules you know..” the man said looking from Peyton to the computer
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Peyton thought about the lady in the kindergarden who couldent stop Nikki from taking Jenny, and Now this guy..
“Look! Im sick of the stupid rules! She kidnapped a baby for god sake!” she saw Jake coming out of the car, then turned over to the Man again. She turned of the computer..
”Ok, look for your sake, I would start talking now, before that guy comes in!” Peyton said as Jake came in. The look up on his face could kill..
“Ok, she is in room 66.” The man said turning on the computer again..
Peyton and Jake ran outside, only to see Nikki getting in the car with Jenny on the lap driving away.
“NIKKI!, NIKKI!” Jake screamed running after the car.
“Jake!!! Come on!” Peyton said starting the car.
Jake got inside as Peyton drove after Nikki.
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Post by angelofgoth926 on Oct 17, 2006 13:29:16 GMT -5
wow your story is amazing. I can't wait to see what happens next
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Post by Peyton Sawyer on Oct 17, 2006 14:12:57 GMT -5
Thank you!!! More are coming soon |
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Post by Haley James Scott on Oct 17, 2006 16:35:01 GMT -5
Amazing!
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Post by Peyton Sawyer on Oct 17, 2006 19:32:16 GMT -5
Thank you! |
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Post by chriizzz on Oct 19, 2006 7:43:30 GMT -5
I love it! |
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Post by Peyton Sawyer on Oct 19, 2006 10:06:20 GMT -5
thanks!
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Post by *SuN*kiSseD* on Oct 22, 2006 23:35:22 GMT -5
That was awesome!!! Ah you're killing me! I can't wait for more!!
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