jessay
Tree Hill Freshman
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Post by jessay on Oct 3, 2007 15:13:54 GMT -5
Summary: Lucas told her he just wanted to be friends, he was with Brooke. What happens when she has moved on, and he starts to regret it. Reviews are greatly appreciated.
Chapter 1: Lost.
"But.. I Love You" she whispered as she turned around she realized he wasn't there. She couldn't get the memories of tonight out of her head.
"I'm with Brooke now Peyton, we should just be friends" he said. She turned around so he couldn't see her like this. He placed his hand on her shoulder hoping to comfort her in someway. She closed her eyes, as she felt his hand. She could feel a tear slide down her cheek. He walked away, but not before turning his head back to see her staring out the window.
She could hear footsteps going down the stairs "but.. I love you" she whispered but it was too late he had left.
the words "just be friends" kept repeating in her head, she broke down. She fell to her knees, crying. She couldn't help it, she had just lost the one guy she wanted to be with.
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Post by samanthajessie on Oct 3, 2007 20:27:24 GMT -5
this is a fantastic start keep up the good work i cant wait to read more
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